Interpretation: How do others interpret your image?
Good mood, intimate, dull/soft which adds to the image, close-up view is good.
Evaluation: Based on critique, describe what is "working" in your image. Describe what is "not working" as well. Describe any changes and improvements you would make.
Maybe try the same photo with her hand in the view.
Extension: How might you use this image as a jumping-off point for a larger project or series of images?
Maybe try a series of morning routines, intimacy, everyday events taken for granted.
Print Suggestions: Suggestion for changes to print to make it "portfolio-worthy"?
Lighten the tones in the face, make eyes more detailed.
Interpretation: How do others interpret your image?
Looks like she would be a ballerina and/or dancer.
Evaluation: Based on critique, describe what is "working" in your image. Describe what is "not working" as well. Describe any changes and improvements you would make.
Nice silhouette, but still keeps good detail in subject. Image could be more sharp. The small amount of light reflection on the necklace is good.
Extension: How might you use this image as a jumping-off point for a larger project or series of images?
New-aged way of showing profiles like they did in the past.
Print Suggestions: Suggestion for changes to print to make it "portfolio-worthy"?
Steaks on the wall in background are distracting.
Interpretation: How do others interpret your image?
She looks like she is making the face to try and conceal something.
Evaluation: Based on critique, describe what is "working" in your image. Describe what is "not working" as well. Describe any changes and improvements you would make.
The light on the subject is really nice, but maybe show more detail of the body. The texture on the wall is good, adds something to the image.
Extension: How might you use this image as a jumping-off point for a larger project or series of images?
Portraits of people who are trying to cover up their true selves/ appear as someone else.
Print Suggestions: Suggestion for changes to print to make it "portfolio-worthy"?
No suggestions, toned well.
Interpretation: How do others interpret your image?
It looks like she is longing for something, thinking about something or someone.
Evaluation: Based on critique, describe what is "working" in your image. Describe what is "not working" as well. Describe any changes and improvements you would make.
Sharpness is good, but maybe lipstick to make her lips stand out more. Lower depth of field in order to get more of a blur behind and in front of subject. White opening in trees is good and adds attention to her.
Extension: How might you use this image as a jumping-off point for a larger project or series of images?
People surrounded by different types of flowers or trees.
Print Suggestions: Suggestion for changes to print to make it "portfolio-worthy"?
Try making background more blurry.
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